Decided to come back to the what does that mean quote. Not really feeling what I have got with it so far. Decided to take the first line to being just 'medium'. It says exactly the same as the original but with less words. Might be easier to work with and allow me to be a bit more experimental with it.
Definitely prefer these. Tried including the ? in too as after all it is a question that's being asked. Also, tried again with the brown. Still feeling the black and white more though. Maybe this is something to put forward in the crit?
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