Saturday, 20 November 2010

No News Is Good News Mailshot - Progress Crit Feedback

Issues Raised.
  • bottle seperate to rest of the mailshot
  • the outside graphic is different to the inside
  • ripped - don't let this happen again
  • uppercase is harder to read - works on the outside though

Action To Be Taken
  • try some information on the bottle to engage with it more so that it's not just thee
  • try having liquid in the bottle oloured in
  • try the outside graphic as lines
  • try website or a section in a graphic similar to outside
  • change the fact on the inside to lowercase

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